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Glass shatters, mom runs,
this is not all joy and fun.
Tiptoe to the commode,
stomping dad did forebode.
Purple eye means no work,
all day here she’ll go berserk.
False apologies, pretend forgiveness,
she doesn’t know how she can live this.
If not for the kids she would leave,
the world outside- she can’t conceive.
Empty tears get shrugged off,
by his nervous, guilty cough.
Things will get better, she still lies,
and in her mind his presence fries.
©2005-2009 ~AlyceGoldfarb
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I wrote this in Espanol and I just thought I would clarify that it is totally fabricated... that's about all I can say.
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very well written. i like it
Thank you very much. I appreciate your input.

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She can't tell me that all of the love songs have been written 'cuz she's never been in love with you before.
Macaroni and Cheese can take lives as well as shape them.
its beautiful and really hard hitting, I love it. Such good writing :heart:

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Dogs feel very strongly that they should always go with you in the car, in case the need should arise for them to bark violently at nothing, right in your ear
Hehehe, thanks! (although I'm pretty sure I shouldn't be heheing over the topic) :)

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She can't tell me that all of the love songs have been written 'cuz she's never been in love with you before.
Macaroni and Cheese can take lives as well as shape them.
it flows really well

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I am the marionette
Thank you.

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She can't tell me that all of the love songs have been written 'cuz she's never been in love with you before.
Macaroni and Cheese can take lives as well as shape them.
yep :D

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I am the marionette
hey lace hey guess what everyone... i got to read it first!!!! lol jk but ne who i told you already but i will tell you again i like this one it is really good!!! c ya l8r

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"gonna join the mile high club at 37000 feet..."
~nickel back~
This is very good. I really must say, very very well written.

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